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Out of this place,
out of this life.

Out of everything.

Somewhere better.
Somewhere where I could look at things
and not be reminded of..
Anything.

Where I could just go
to forget
and be forgotten.

But I wake up every morning
in the same bed as the day before.

And it crushes me.
:iconjassiemaam:
Overthinking when I wish I could be sleeping.
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:iconforeverforwards:
Incredibly thought provoking. I felt the crushing of waking The last two sentences. Awesome work.
P.S. Hope you're okay
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!DancingShadowLeaves Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I have felt like this before. Excellent job on capturing that emotion!
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~silvertitan93 Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know this feeling. Its a great poem and hope you feel better =)
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:iconsutsuki-sensei:
Well-written but I am sure that there are people that care about you and are happy to see you. :huggle: I hope that things get better for you friend. ^^
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~Mierren Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
good!
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