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Strainbreaking face
rolling around with misery
listening voices
tears bleed
flowing hearts
blocked dreams
locked screams
what is seems
who believes
count the weeks
lonely
songs brings
heartless things
thoughtless mean
Crying me
Focus please
Catch means
Death
Swallowing breath
Shallow help
look in the well
Zero tale
Zero tell
Burning hell
Fail
Abandon shell
All of us are here
Ta osobaTo osoba kochana
i powszechnie szanowana.
Wiek jej... Się nie liczy.
Serce ma jakby wyrwane z Zawiszy.
Nigdy Cię nie zawiedzie, ale doradzi.
Niebawem jej święto, więc prezencik mamy.
To ten skromny wierszyk i kilka drobiazgów.
Bo Twe serce jest pełne drobiazgów, Mamo. c:
His WarYou look at my arms and ask me why
You thought I was better
You thought I was alright
But as I trace
Those fine, red lines
I whisper so softly
It's almost a sigh
"No, no
I'm perfectly fine

"But in his sorrow he is caught
He has tear stains in his eyes
From the wars he fought
He lets out a terrible cry
For the things he's sought
So how can I be happy
When he is not?"
Snow Queen
She's not reacting to anyone's love,
She always stays cold,
She loves to be in snow,
And no one knows what she's capable of,
She's always alone,
She's a master of her snow world.

She's called Snow Queen,
She's always so mean,
Happiness makes her sick,
It makes her weak,
But the Queen holds on,
With the power of snow.

The Queen rules the Kingdom,
She knows the meaning of freedom,
A lot of people tried to change her,
But they became frozen,
She wants to stay away,
She don't want anyone to get in her way.
It's War!It's War!

It's war, when the father gets up in his holidays by 5 clock.
         When he enters his service for the family like everyone else.
         When he just attacks the pool-landscape of the Normadie.
         When he raised his flag to mark his capture area.
         He and 500 others.

It's war, when she attacks the discounts.
         When she search for the armed conflict between her girlfriends.
         When she capture ressources, she didn't need.
         When she also brings scarped knees with her new summer skirt home.
         She and 500 others.

It's war, when the whole humans loose their heads.
         We and
Esas madrugadas llenas de pensEsas madrugadas llenas de pensamientos rodeando mi cabeza como enredaderas unidas unas con otras, donde pienso real y no emocional, donde tu me cegaste y me tiraste a mi suerte, donde ahora me levanto solo, donde ahora tu te encuentras en el cielo, pero pronto caerás, recuerda las nubes no son de hierro.
Hey guys...You want to know a secret?hey...when people ask hows it going? or whats up? or how ya been? do they actually care how you've been?

I don't think even 50% of them care.

they have their own problems. As do I. However, I'm part of the fifty percent that would rather listen to other peoples issues instead of mine. Instead of doing homework or listen to teachers in school or do something people "Believe" is important to graduate high school. I would rather help someone. Do something more important.

Honestly... I think high school is a waste of time. Why can't high school be classes that would actually teach you what you "need" to know? cause honestly if I want to become
.:Vent-Drown:.I feel like I can't breathe,
Making me become a monster I can't see.
Down I continue to sink,
Really feeling useless dying the water in my tears of ink,
Overly emotional,
Well I've lost my sanity, I've lost it all;
Never will I be able to swim back up,
I can't see the sun,
Never will I get to see it anymore, because I'm....
Gone
1Tienes el mismo repertorio y las mismas actitudes para cada persona que se topa en tu camino?, sera acaso el mismo inesperado final para cada amorío estúpido?

Juegas con fuego,
deja de tocar las puertas del infierno,
algún día abrirán, y seras devorada por tu misma boca.
UnnoticedUnnoticed
 
It seems like I’ve become see threw
Like I’m just not there
Except for when I’m in trouble
I can’t seem to find how that’s fair
 
Maybe it’s cause I’m the middle child
Or that I don’t have a special skill
Maybe I don’t cause enough problems
Will she notice me if I were to kill?
 
Whatever the case may be
I seem to always be out shined
By a sister who loves and cares
And a brother who’s dumb and blind
 
Mother just doesn’t see me
I feel like I’ve been tossed away
A machine with not heart
Only able to obey
 
I’ve become a drone
Not actually a part
Of this perfect little family
Silly drone you’re not so smart
 
For thinking she would notice you
For thinking she would care
For a screw up like you
Love you? She wouldn’t dare
 
No she doesn’t love you
She only loves her boy
You’re just here to do the chores
Just her cleaning little toy
Horario muertoEsas manecillas de reloj que tornan lentas en tus horas de agonía, como una tortura para tu cráneo, yo no entiendo.

Tienes todo no eres feliz,

tienes poco no eres feliz.

Entonces escarbe dentro de mi, y encontré algo llamado;
"detalles".

Sean efímeros, sean perpetuos..
No se como pueden damas desperNo se como pueden damas desperdiciar a un hombre que viste de galas, escribe en sus días adversos pero hace el amor como si no hubiera universo.
Mereces.Resultaste ser en carne propia lo que odiabas de las anteriores mentes mediocres que cruzaron mi camino, ahora no te queda mas que atarte una cuerda al cuello, recuerda esas personas te enferman, ahora pruebas lo que odias y ahora eres tu la persona enferma, así que deja las excusas deja las mentiras, deja toda esa estúpida saliva gastada en vano, solo muere, sin metáforas ni nada no mereces ni la tinta con la que escribo para mi placer de odio, sin embargo lo hago por que mejor medicina que esta para mi no hay.
RotosYa no soy la persona que solía ser, aquel naufrago que nunca se dio por vencido en las islas perdidas, a todo le encontraba una dosis de emoción.
Ahora solo camino encobrado mis pasos son lentos y tediosos, una espora letal mas jodida que el mismo veneno entro en mi y esa enfermedad tiene nombre..
Dream or RealOnce upon a dream
A fairy tale it seems

A strong sense of heart
Breaking at the seams

A cold wind blows
As strong as steel

Alone through it all
Could this be real?

Hate robs all
Love forgives

Love is gone
I struggle to live

Give up hope
Forever alone

For this is real
Chilled to the bone.
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TrappedPeople never look past
My dime-a-dozen beauty
Something that will never last
The mask that hides just me

All they expect
Is an award winning smile
My words have no affect
They only stay a while

It's like I mean nothing
To them or anyone
I like to think I'm something
And good for more than fun

But for now my face defeats me
Rules from behind my thoughts
Leads me where they want me to be
As I watch while all I want is lost.
Hopelessly HopelessI'll give you my all
If I get all of you
You can have my heart and soul
If you just stay true

I'm a hopeless fool
And a hopeless romantic, too
But I mean it when I say
Without you I don't know what I'd do

I hear that I'm like so many
I'm nothing you should stay for
But somehow you've stayed
On my side of the door

So don't give up now
We've made it this long
I think I can keep this going
I try not to do you wrong

So hear me out a minute
This may be out of the blue
But every second you speak my name
I fall so hard in love with you.
PickyI don't need you to play me
Don't need you to break my heart
I do not need to fuck around
Or for shit to start

So if you're looking for some fun
This is the wrong phone call
I want someone who's worth something
Or I'll stick with nothing at all

There's been too much shit
Too many fights
To let all that
Back in my life

So take my words for this
Forever's what I'm looking for
And if you're not ready to see that through
Then just make sure you close my door.
Running From That ArrowI'm a serial heartbreaker
I don't need your feelings
All it does is hold me in
Give me a glass ceiling

You're good for a week or two
And then I'm moving on
Leaving you behind
Can't keep me down for long

I've never been heartbroken
Because no one's had it yet
People gamble with their lives
Mine's too good for a bet

So do what you think you should
Play your game of Russian roulette
How you sacrifice yourself so well
I can never get

Every time someone crumbles
It just proves that I'm above
Baby, no one's worth
What you excuse for "love".

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Holding Firm

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All you feel now is pain
No, no, that's a lie
Collapsing right through the strain
I meant my words, don't even try


You could always just let go
You don't know what you ask for
No one would judge, no one would know
And have no hope left at my core


What was once strong can be weak
I can't give up this time
Your voice cracks e'er you speak
And that boon is mine


All of this could just end
Poisoned honey coats those lips
Trust me, companion, faithful friend
Your falsehoods nightshade as it drips


You wish this pain would go away
Your words have no purchase here
Give me a chance to your demons slay
You know not the root of my fear


Lend me your words, darling sweet
To you I would never submit
I could make your sorrows all complete
He will always be worth it
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Critique by =NobleQueenOfLothaire Nov 19, 2012, 4:02:15 PM
The first thing that came to mind after reading this was how it was it was like two poems in one. I felt like I could take out the second and fourth line of each stanza and still have a complete poem. I like how you italicize the first and third lines of each stanza, that's a really good technique to use so the lines stand out.

The only stanza I had trouble with was "You wish the pain would go away, your words have no purchase here, Give me a chance to your demons slay, your know no the root of my fear." The third line is a little iffy and I would consider looking over it.

Overall the poem has a very nice flaw and your description is fantastic. Job well done.
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